[MizunoJoe]

Whip,

Lots to like here. Great Impact and Follow-through (to Both Arms Straight) alignments. The student is Hitting (as evident in his Release motion). I would offer him the alternative of the Hitter's Drive Loading procedure (10-19-A) from the Top (per the Hitter's Basic Pattern 12-1-0) instead of his current Drag Loading (10-19-C) which is more compatible with Swinging (per 12-2-0).

Thanks for posting!

Since he goes to the End, rather than stopping at the Top, I just assumed he was Swinging. Hitting would explain his hands moving away from his right shoulder and relative lack of hip action. Larry Nelson is the only other Hitter I have seen who goes to the End.