Where do I start?

[Yoda]

I'm pretty sure I can figure that one out. I agree totally. Well, I have some more footage up after trying to heed Yoda's and Mike O's advice. Tell me what you think.
http://www.geocities.com/robmont64/swing3.html

tgmnut,

You may be able to feel the difference -- and that's a first step -- but I cannot see any differences yet. Your Start Up looks exactly the same, and so does your Shift to the Squared Shoulder Plane. On closer inspection, you do seem to have decreased the Bob somewhat.

This time 'round, I would also add the following to your Work In Process Checklist:

1. Left Foot Action. In the Down-the-Line view, check the excess Roll to the outer edge of the Left Foot. Note also the weight toward the toes that has your heel 'tapping' and your Balance teetering. The 'turn' on the heel is not so disruptive, but do you really want all that with a mid-iron?

2. Exaggerated Finish. Again, you are a playing a mid-iron here. This is the super-full Finish one would normally see only with the longest Clubs. The 'wraparound' of your Arms has caused your Hands to separate at the Finish -- the heel of your Right Hand has lost contact with the thumb of the Left Hand. Keep that Pressure Point intact throughout the Stroke, and cut that Finish back.

3. Finish Swivel. You have one, but it is extremely delayed. Your Hands are shoulder-high into the Finish before you finally Swivel. Hitting or Swinging, the Swivel should occur as you exit the Follow-Through (with your Right Forearm about parallel to the ground). You exit the Follow-Through with a non-Swiveled Left Forearm and hence, a Bent Left Wrist. So, Swivel sooner.