After all the dumb stuff I've done with a golf swing over the years, yours looks very good. Hands to Pivot look good from my perspective and your right elbow appears pretty good as well, if that's what you were asking.
It looks like a nice spot to practice there in the garage, Grant. When I had the shanks your right side door would have been heavily damaged. I would have had to move any breakables as well.
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