Rob, my two cents would be to suggest you go to Lynn's youtube channel and watch the lesson with Colin Neeman series of videos.
I would also suggest you check out any video of Lynn where he talks about hinge action.
Your swing isn't awful, a lot of it looks good and I'm sure all the AI's on here would love to get their (educated) mits on you because IMHO it wouldn't take them long to have you hitting piercing frozen ropes into the yonder!
If you don't have it, get "Alignment Golf", you will find it extremely useful, especially all the drills.
I should add that I am merely a seeker like yourself, I have no formal training whatsoever.
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